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PostSubject: First couple of pannels.   Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:24 pm

I haven't drawn the piccas yet. But here's what I've written so far......
[I appologize for the stupidity.. And anything in brackets is Xish's thoughts.]

[Sometimes... I feel the urge to strangle myself out of humiliation...]

-His brobro is dressed up like some knock off WoW character-

[But, I somehow am able to supress it.]

Xish: What.. the hell..

David -his brother-: What are you staring at, gnome? Never seen a golden woodland wizard before?

Xish: ...No. No I haven't.

David: Pfft. You're such a fizzle.

Xish: Well then. I must re-evaluate my life now.

David: My clan members and I are meeting in the woods tonight for a sorcery ritual. That's the only information I can give away.

Xish: -blank stare-

David: I've already told too much. I must be leaving now! -Runs to the door-

[As stated before. That whole strangling out of humiliation..] [Watching my brother be himself is more painful than irritating.]

-when David's about to leave, his mom stops him-

Mom: Sweety, where are you going?

David: Mom, I told you a thousand times about my secret ritual tonight!

Mom: Well, it's too dark out. I don't think it's safe for you to be going out this late at night.

David: MOM! I can't let my clan down! I'm the golden woodland wizard! That's the most important class on the Supherian alliance! I get 20 stanima per transformation!!

Mom: Well, I don't think it's safe going out at this time of night alone.

Xish: Don't worry about him, mom. He has the powers of the Supherian alliance to defend him. He IS the golden woodland wizard, you know? And even if it turns out that he's just a lifeless fuck with no friends or other worldly powers, no one would want to touch him! Look how fat he is!

Mom: Hmm.. I have a good idea! Xish, how about you go with your brother!

Xish: No. That's a horrible idea.

David: Mom! The sorcery rituals are NOT for the eyes of the collective people. They are HIGHLY sacred to the Supherian alliance!

Mom: Xish, this is important to your brother. Just how the things you do are important to you.

Xish: Yes, but the things I do are normal. And my grasp on reality is still firm.

David: Pfft. Go suck a lemon, you dwarf molesting level 2 centaur magician.

Xish: -stare-


Yeah. It sucks pretty hard so far. Go ahead and lol at my crapistic dialogue skills.

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Fri Sep 17, 2010 3:57 pm

*lols at your crapistic dialogue skills*

jk it was good.

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:03 pm

MEHHH i think it's stupid pale

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:08 pm

I think it's not stupid.

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Fri Sep 17, 2010 5:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:35 pm

i think it's stupid
someone help me write some of it

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:51 am

idk..
if i were to change anything about it i'd probably make the characters less.... hmm.. not generic exactly.. just not so.... idk..

i mean like how his mom is just like "Xish why don't you go to the ritual too!"

it just seems kinda random/weird to say.

BUT IDK.

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:54 am

maybe you could make it so his mom is making him go to the ritual as punishment or something..

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:50 pm

well like his mom doesn't want david to go alone because it's late
so she wants xish to go so he won't be alone
y'kno bro

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:06 pm

oh i see.
that makes sense.

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PostSubject: Re: First couple of pannels.   Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:41 pm

DERP HURP

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